The songwriters corner

[lizette]

I know we all ready have a poets corner,, so I wanted to make a songwriters corner
so I will post my last song! ;D
Hey you.

verse 1
Hey you,
you georgeous boy out there.
why are you staring this way?
And smiling to me?
What were you thinking at that moment?
About me? or just about other things?
Or were you all ready planning to break down my heart?

chores
It's been a long har job to forget you.
To ban you completely out of my life.
Why did you used me, like I was some kind of toy?
you told me I was the only one for you.
But I ended up crying on the floor.

verse 2
Hey you,
You handsome “man” out there.
Why do you make me laugh?
Why are our interests the same?
Why did you want to kiss me?
You know I’ve got feelings for you.
You told me you loved me too.
Did you all ready come up with the plan to break down my heart?

chores
It's been a long har job to forget you.
To ban you completely out of my life.
Why did you used me, like I was some kind of toy?
you told me I was the only one for you.
But I ended up crying on the floor.

verse 3
Sometimes I still think about you.
Not even sometimes. Every single day.
I guess I still care about you, even though I don’t want to.
Why is the only question I’ve got for you. It’s okay I’ll survive without you.

chores
It's been a long har job to forget you.
To ban you completely out of my life.
Why did you used me, like I was some kind of toy?
you told me I was the only one for you.
But I ended up crying on the floor.

*Fade out*

[yve]

I told you already that I really think that´s good stuff .. . KEEP ON WRITING AND POSTING .

[lizette]

yve said:

I told you already that I really think that´s good stuff .. . KEEP ON WRITING AND POSTING .

thank you so much!!1!

[Olga]

OMG!!!!! LIZ!!!! Your song is AWESOME!!!! you should write a music!!!!
GO GIRL!!!!

[lizette]

olga said:

OMG!!!!! LIZ!!!! Your song is AWESOME!!!! you should write a music!!!!
GO GIRL!!!!

OMG Olga! You made me blushing!!
Thank you so much!!

[LaDolceViita]

lizette said:

I know we all ready have a poets corner,, so I wanted to make a songwriters corner
so I will post my last song! ;D
Hey you.

verse 1
Hey you,
you georgeous boy out there.
why are you staring this way?
And smiling to me?
What were you thinking at that moment?
About me? or just about other things?
Or were you all ready planning to break down my heart?

chores
It's been a long har job to forget you.
To ban you completely out of my life.
Why did you used me, like I was some kind of toy?
you told me I was the only one for you.
But I ended up crying on the floor.

verse 2
Hey you,
You handsome “man” out there.
Why do you make me laugh?
Why are our interests the same?
Why did you want to kiss me?
You know I’ve got feelings for you.
You told me you loved me too.
Did you all ready come up with the plan to break down my heart?

chores
It's been a long har job to forget you.
To ban you completely out of my life.
Why did you used me, like I was some kind of toy?
you told me I was the only one for you.
But I ended up crying on the floor.

verse 3
Sometimes I still think about you.
Not even sometimes. Every single day.
I guess I still care about you, even though I don’t want to.
Why is the only question I’ve got for you. It’s okay I’ll survive without you.

chores
It's been a long har job to forget you.
To ban you completely out of my life.
Why did you used me, like I was some kind of toy?
you told me I was the only one for you.
But I ended up crying on the floor.

*Fade out*

Lizette, this is the reason why this Zlatan site is different. Great contribution !

Do you have singing aspirations ?

[lizette]

ladolceviita said:

lizette said:

I know we all ready have a poets corner,, so I wanted to make a songwriters corner
so I will post my last song! ;D
Hey you.

verse 1
Hey you,
you georgeous boy out there.
why are you staring this way?
And smiling to me?
What were you thinking at that moment?
About me? or just about other things?
Or were you all ready planning to break down my heart?

chores
It's been a long har job to forget you.
To ban you completely out of my life.
Why did you used me, like I was some kind of toy?
you told me I was the only one for you.
But I ended up crying on the floor.

verse 2
Hey you,
You handsome “man” out there.
Why do you make me laugh?
Why are our interests the same?
Why did you want to kiss me?
You know I’ve got feelings for you.
You told me you loved me too.
Did you all ready come up with the plan to break down my heart?

chores
It's been a long har job to forget you.
To ban you completely out of my life.
Why did you used me, like I was some kind of toy?
you told me I was the only one for you.
But I ended up crying on the floor.

verse 3
Sometimes I still think about you.
Not even sometimes. Every single day.
I guess I still care about you, even though I don’t want to.
Why is the only question I’ve got for you. It’s okay I’ll survive without you.

chores
It's been a long har job to forget you.
To ban you completely out of my life.
Why did you used me, like I was some kind of toy?
you told me I was the only one for you.
But I ended up crying on the floor.

*Fade out*

Lizette, this is the reason why this Zlatan site is different. Great contribution !

Do you have singing aspirations ?

thank you so much LDV!!!
hm,, I don't know,, I do sing a lot,, at school I've got to sing often because my teacher want to,, at home I sing because I love to sing,, accually I sing every where

[LaDolceViita]

lizette said:

ladolceviita said:

Lizette, this is the reason why this Zlatan site is different. Great contribution !

Do you have singing aspirations ?

thank you so much LDV!!!
hm,, I don't know,, I do sing a lot,, at school I've got to sing often because my teacher want to,, at home I sing because I love to sing,, accually I sing every where

You sing everywhere..hehee...ok...do something with it professionally if you feel comfortable...

[tonyrealstar]

Lizette , you will have to put it in music to see what it could give.

You do what i tried already to do without meaning success.

Go on to work !!
As i always say , only work can bring you to the summum.

[lizette]

ladolceviita said:

lizette said:

thank you so much LDV!!!
hm,, I don't know,, I do sing a lot,, at school I've got to sing often because my teacher want to,, at home I sing because I love to sing,, accually I sing every where

You sing everywhere..hehee...ok...do something with it professionally if you feel comfortable...

haha maybe I will,, thx

[lizette]

tonyrealstar said:

Lizette , you will have to put it in music to see what it could give.

You do what i tried already to do without meaning success.

Go on to work !!
As i always say , only work can bring you to the summum.

hahaha I know I have to put music under it to see how it sounds,, but I don't know if I can but this must be a slow song you know? with all my songs I've got a melody,, but mostly I don't do something with it,, just the tekst.

[lizette]

Here is a new one!!! Go easily on me guys hahahaha

And all because of you!


I used to be so strong,
But you broke it all down.
I used to take it all,
But you broke me down.
You only sad that you fooled me.
That you didn’t have any feelings for me at all.
You just wanted to see me cry.
I hope you’re happy now.
Because I did.

I cried about you.
Yeah,, it’s the worst thing I could do.
But I did.
I guess you enjoyed it,
The way you saw me,
Crying, screaming, crazy on my bed.
You shouldn’t have seen it.
But you did.
So just be happy.

I don’t show my weaknesses often.
But I just lost my mind.
The things you did to me.
The things you did for me.
It was so soft and sweet,
But now I see it was all a game.
I lost my trust in love forever.
I lost my trust in men.
I lost my trust in you.
Why don’t you realise this was the worst thing you could ever do?

I cried about you.
Yeah,, it’s the worst thing I could do.
But I did.
I guess you enjoyed it,
The way you saw me,
Crying, screaming, crazy on my bed.
You shouldn’t have seen it.
But you did.
So just be happy.

I used to be so strong.
Now I’m only crying. So weak.
I never showed my weaknesses.
But now I can’t hide it anymore,
And that all because of you.

[lizette]

and once again Yve made up the title!
Thx Yve

[...:: en[J]0YZlat@n ::,,]

you know what I think about this song ;D

[lizette]

enjoyzlatie said:

you know what I think about this song ;D

kind of