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Post by lizette on Nov 2, 2005 12:46:32 GMT -5
awh... so sweet of you!! I'm proud to have you as a friend of mine too!!! ;D eventhough I can't write poems, like it seems what on earth are you talking about?! you can write poems and you know that! of was je complimentjes aant vissen?
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Post by ...:: en[J]0YZlat@n ::,, on Nov 3, 2005 11:53:53 GMT -5
eventhough I can't write poems, like it seems what on earth are you talking about?! you can write poems and you know that! of was je complimentjes aant vissen? zoals jij altijd doet bedoel je you only saw one poem from me I still got 2 in sketch but those are terrible, if I would post it, then I've got loads of work for the finishing touch
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Post by lizette on Nov 4, 2005 15:31:42 GMT -5
what on earth are you talking about?! you can write poems and you know that! of was je complimentjes aant vissen? zoals jij altijd doet bedoel je you only saw one poem from me I still got 2 in sketch but those are terrible, if I would post it, then I've got loads of work for the finishing touch pardon?! whahahah naaaajaaa zeg! I've got a lot of sketches,, mostly about the same subject,, so they look a lot a like... then I don't finish them,, or I don't like them... Try me IMPRESS ME
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Post by dolppen on Nov 16, 2005 14:39:14 GMT -5
We had to write a mini-saga for english class. A minisaga is a poem with exactly 50 words in it. But it dont have to rime and stuff like that, in other words, it can be kind of boring:P but I tried to do something with my. Dont know if its sound so good, but why not post it here:P I admit my is kind of crappy Fight or flight? Run and flee but you can not hide. Since I exis,t far and wide. If you are hiding over there, do not forget that I am everywhere. Why don’t you stop and fight me here. Are you afraid to show me your fear? Come out and fight, I’m here tonight. At least my had some point with this,... My friends didnt have any:P And it is 50 words exactly:P
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Post by yve on Nov 17, 2005 6:55:52 GMT -5
hhaaha dolppen , that´s sweet rhyming - good for a beginner (you should try to write more - at least it trains your use of words )
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Post by Kirsten on Nov 17, 2005 13:07:58 GMT -5
We had to write a mini-saga for english class. A minisaga is a poem with exactly 50 words in it. But it dont have to rime and stuff like that, in other words, it can be kind of boring:P but I tried to do something with my. Dont know if its sound so good, but why not post it here:P I admit my is kind of crappy Fight or flight? Run and flee but you can not hide. Since I exis,t far and wide. If you are hiding over there, do not forget that I am everywhere. Why don’t you stop and fight me here. Are you afraid to show me your fear? Come out and fight, I’m here tonight. At least my had some point with this,... My friends didnt have any:P And it is 50 words exactly:P I like it!!! Seriously Write more!!
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Post by lizette on Nov 18, 2005 10:05:51 GMT -5
We had to write a mini-saga for english class. A minisaga is a poem with exactly 50 words in it. But it dont have to rime and stuff like that, in other words, it can be kind of boring:P but I tried to do something with my. Dont know if its sound so good, but why not post it here:P I admit my is kind of crappy Fight or flight? Run and flee but you can not hide. Since I exis,t far and wide. If you are hiding over there, do not forget that I am everywhere. Why don’t you stop and fight me here. Are you afraid to show me your fear? Come out and fight, I’m here tonight. At least my had some point with this,... My friends didnt have any:P And it is 50 words exactly:P you're good I like it a lot!!
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Post by lizette on Dec 18, 2005 14:21:55 GMT -5
Where I belong.
If I’d tell you, How much you mean to me. I think you would not believe me. But my feelings for you, Can not be explained in words. You kept my biggest secret, And still do. Loving you is so hard to do, So hard, But somehow it’s also so easily. Hating you is the hardest thing I ever had to do. So hard, I couldn’t even can. But when I think about it, Our friendship is even better, So much better, Then some relationships. The trust and the faith we have in each-other, The love and the hugs, Are mostly even better, So much better, Then some lovers have. The laughs we’ve had, About 2 boys this summer, Who loved me. We laughed, Because we knew, My heart belongs to you. When you kissed my cheek, And sad you’re sorry for all the pain you’ve cost. You’re so sorry, So sorry. We huged to make up, It was better, So much better, Then some lovers hug. You sad you were sorry, So sorry, And made me laugh again. When you touched my lips, I knew where I belong, I belong to you.
16-12-05
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Post by yve on Dec 19, 2005 8:02:08 GMT -5
special guys in your life Lizette , good one , congratz
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Post by lizette on Dec 19, 2005 9:11:08 GMT -5
special guys in your life Lizette , good one , congratz he is special indeed... ( However a few friends think different about that haha )and thank you...
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Post by yve on Dec 19, 2005 11:12:51 GMT -5
special guys in your life Lizette , good one , congratz he is special indeed... ( However a few friends think different about that haha )and thank you... it doesn´t matter what "friends" think , it´s just important what you feel about that
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Post by lizette on Dec 27, 2005 14:22:36 GMT -5
he is special indeed... ( However a few friends think different about that haha )and thank you... it doesn´t matter what "friends" think , it´s just important what you feel about that Yeah that's true..
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Post by yve on Dec 28, 2005 12:19:39 GMT -5
I wrote poems for Olga and Zig as X-mas presents that were found in the first real book version of my work . I thought now you all maybe would like to read them . I have made to keep it almost secret until now . To Where You BelongThough I´ve seen you Walking through heated Desert sand A thousand times In my dreams
You are still Like a mirage Covered with taffeta scarfs And golden jewellery Moving the air With tempting waves Your hands draw in Lithe dance
These moments When the Persian wind Whirls around Oasis and Endless camel hills
I close my eyes And face heaven´s Desert flower In bloom
A deceitful scent Paralysed dark thoughts Destination silent delight
Though I´ve seen you Walking in this Eccentric heart of mine A thousand times before I just feel today That paradise Is To where you belongDedicated to Olga
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Post by yve on Dec 28, 2005 12:24:13 GMT -5
In Erotica
Breathe in Exstacy air She sweetens
When her Soft fingertips Long for Smooth skin and Enticing lips Give in
Give in When she strokes Your hair
Forget about Resisting The sinner´s scent In erotica
There you see her Bare With silver heels of insanity Whispering the final invitation
Breathe in Breathe out Inferno air She reigns
Dedicated to Sigita
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Post by ...:: en[J]0YZlat@n ::,, on Dec 28, 2005 17:10:14 GMT -5
wow, excellent work again!! and you really finished your book??? wow, I'm so proud of you!! Where can I find it my dear???
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