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Post by lizette on Jul 2, 2005 16:31:38 GMT -5
could you post it in French too?? if it isn't too much trouble? I want to know how it is in French
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Post by LaDolceViita on Jul 3, 2005 21:09:46 GMT -5
No question that Yve is the queen of poetry......
Great stuff....!
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Post by milla on Jul 4, 2005 11:56:18 GMT -5
Great poems Yve!! Very great poems girl!!!!
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Post by lizette on Jul 5, 2005 6:58:51 GMT -5
wow,, that's great Milla!! ;D keep up the good work!!!
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Post by Olga on Jul 5, 2005 9:58:18 GMT -5
I knew that you're so talented, guys!!! WONDERFUL POEMS!!!!
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Post by lizette on Jul 9, 2005 15:33:47 GMT -5
I'll post a poem I've post on the other forum... I made it for Yve! ( but it isn't about her,, I've just wrote it and deddicated to her ) here it comes: In heavenwhy didn't you say goodbye? I can't believe that you're gone. I can't live without you. Why couldn't you just keep living on? I've had so many plans to do, Now I have to do them alone before you died, I wished you thought about me, and saw how Sad and unhappy I would be I hope you can see me in heaven in the sky, And I hope you see me write this poem about you and I, Even you're in the sky, I still hope you'll say goodbye If I hear the thunder, I imagine it's you, who calls me If I feel the sun, I imagine it's you, who wants to touch me, If I see the clouds, I imagine it's you, who wants to protect me. Then I realised, if you're in heaven in the sky, You don't alwayse have to say goodbye! To YveJune 6 2005
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Post by Olga on Jul 14, 2005 5:42:50 GMT -5
@liz I've already told you that your poem is just AWESOME!!! GO GIRL!!! I really love it!!
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Post by LaDolceViita on Jul 14, 2005 10:34:38 GMT -5
- A frontal attack - You’d think I would have learned by now That you can’t trust just anyone. I give my heart too easily. People step on it just for fun. And yet I still go back for more Thinking people can change. When I anticipate humane behaviour. People act as if I’m strange. You can’t expect anything From people you don’t really know. You think they reveal as much as you But just half is what they show. Soon they get you to confide Things you’d never share Before you know it they are gone To spread secrets who knows where. Not only do they spill the beans They include some spice as well. Your story wasn’t wild enough. They add lies to what they tell. Sometimes twist what you said Or leave out important parts. Whatever they do to the truth Leaves a stab wound in your heart. You never see it coming The knife enters from the back. Why do friends lack the nerve To launch a frontal attack. Milla....hands down to your post - The post of the week ! As for the last part of the poem, anyone messing with me ......its always a full scale frontal.
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Post by lizette on Jul 14, 2005 14:28:58 GMT -5
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Post by milla on Jul 14, 2005 15:26:53 GMT -5
- A frontal attack - You’d think I would have learned by now That you can’t trust just anyone. I give my heart too easily. People step on it just for fun. And yet I still go back for more Thinking people can change. When I anticipate humane behaviour. People act as if I’m strange. You can’t expect anything From people you don’t really know. You think they reveal as much as you But just half is what they show. Soon they get you to confide Things you’d never share Before you know it they are gone To spread secrets who knows where. Not only do they spill the beans They include some spice as well. Your story wasn’t wild enough. They add lies to what they tell. Sometimes twist what you said Or leave out important parts. Whatever they do to the truth Leaves a stab wound in your heart. You never see it coming The knife enters from the back. Why do friends lack the nerve To launch a frontal attack. Milla....hands down to your post - The post of the week ! As for the last part of the poem, anyone messing with me ......its always a full scale frontal. Is that so honey?
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Post by LaDolceViita on Jul 14, 2005 21:34:29 GMT -5
Milla....hands down to your post - The post of the week ! As for the last part of the poem, anyone messing with me ......its always a full scale frontal. Is that so honey? Yep...
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Post by milla on Jul 22, 2005 15:23:02 GMT -5
It's something wrong ...with what I feel ...with what I'm thinking ...with what I say ...with what I do ...with what I want ...with my life ...with me.
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Post by yve on Jul 24, 2005 15:02:32 GMT -5
So , hm . . . I am sure that for some people this won´t be what they had expected .
The Moon Trilogy Part II
Moon & Agony
Bleed for me mistress of despair and see the curse I send your kin
Cry for me betrayed hurt heart and accept the tongue that gently licks your open wounds
Suffer for me cheating beauty and face the agony I wish to follow the years passing by
to the moment of revenge
July , 24th Yve
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Post by Olga on Jul 24, 2005 23:48:09 GMT -5
@milla, WOW! I like ur poems very much! can't wait to read more.... ;D @ Yve, you know my thoughts about ur works..... I told you many times... Es ist perfekt! Ich liebe dich!
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Post by yve on Jul 25, 2005 6:16:31 GMT -5
Ich liebe dich auch . btw : I was listening to 2 songs while I wrote the poem . Bob Dylan Blowing in the Wind and Strange Fruit The Flame still burnsCheck these ones out if you want to know about my mood .
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